Fang Talks

Gullible

Kind of hard writing down parts of the story when you haven’t thought them out a full one hundred percent yet.

So this is my crappy attempt at wording this properly. Properly checked version will be edited into this tomorrow, or the day after. Who knows what the future holds.


It was a good day of walking before they reached their destination.
‘Welcome,’ Scout said, ‘to the Guild.’
Before them stood a grand castle, surrounded by huge plains. A few people were exercising out on the fields.
‘Wow!’ Fang gasped in disbelief. It was like the castle came straight from a fairy tale. It wasn’t the biggest castle around, but still pretty large.
‘Nice, isn’t it? But you must be tired by now. Come on, we’ll get you a room.’

They entered the main hall of the castle. Tiled marble floor, big windows, staircases leading up to the first floor on the left and right side of the hall. There was a counter in the back, a lady sitting behind it.
Scout approached her. ‘Jannet, can I get a room for Fang here?’
She looked up. A strand of long, oak-brown hair hung before her left eye. ‘Is he registered yet?’ she asked. ‘I don’t think I’ve seen him around before.’
‘Look,’ Scout sighed, ‘I picked him up from the streets, his beast was going wild. I’m sure the kid could use a little rest.’
Jannet took a key out of one of the many drawers behind her, and handed it to Fang. ‘Room 142, second hall on the first floor.’
Fang mumbled a thanks.
‘Welcome to the Guild of Beasts.’ Jannet smiled. ‘Enjoy your stay!’

Scout guided Fang to his room. ‘Get some sleep kid, you need it.’ he said. ‘I’ll see if I can make some time tomorrow to walk you through everything. No worries, make yourself at home, and I’ll see you then!’

There he was. Alone. In a proper room.
Fang took a quick shower and went to bed. He had trouble sleeping, though. So much had happened today. So many questions. It was also a very long time ago that he had last slept in a real bed.

He woke up to the sound of someone loudly knocking on his door.


Nothing too long, but bluh. Not entirely happy with it, so this will may just change when you reload the page.
~ Fang

Comments

  • 22/10/2011 (10:18 AM)

    And then they were attacked by the guild of reptiles and they have begun invading the castle.

  • 21/10/2011 (5:04 PM)

    Uh oh, are there going to more hints to furry-esque creatures in the future?

  • 21/10/2011 (4:00 PM)

    There’s a character called Scout in a book I just read… I’m sorry, I really can’t help picturing the scout from the book when I read this.

  • 20/10/2011 (11:45 PM)

    I liked it, except for the evil shortness you insist on posting in.

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